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Okay so after we taped the map pieces all together and then put plexi glass over it and marked the places where we found the map pieces  we pretty much traveled around our whole home town, which means my dad will probably hear about it……. He knows practically every person in town……. We all sat around in a circle in the hangout. Steph, Allie, Lexi, Katie W and Brian all had seats, Brian’s friends and I were sitting on the ground on the carpet we put up there. We still had not gotten the bench we were promised. Oh well so yeah after that all of my friends offered to take my place on the floor but considering I didn’t really care I said no. After the 80th time Brian’s friends bugged me and teased me and made me trip down the stairs resulting in me getting a wonderful bruises on my shoulders and back I ran thru my secret pathway up to  my  apple tree now only one person knows about my secret passages. And then I climbed my tree and just calmed down. Then I walked back up the normal way to my hangout and I hoped my friends made sure that the guys followed the rules. As I was walking up to the hangout I quietly walked up the stairs and yelled BOO. The funny part was they all spazzed out and KTW feel out of her chair onto one of the guys , more specifically one of the guys we teased her about .XD as we all laughed hysterically and helped her up  she started spazzing and blaming the guy and Brian.  
So after that errrr….. Interesting episode we flipped the map over and looked at the back……. The guy KTW fell on asked what’s that word pointing to the word amo.
“Its love in Spanish, don’t you pay attention in Spanish?” I asked pretty much already knowing the answer.
“No, why can you speak Spanish?  ” yeah that was his reply.  (1)
“Si, tu stupido, yo hablo espanol.” I replied exasperated  (2)
“What?” he replied as the rest of my friends just looked at him amazed that he couldn’t figure out the simple sentence.   
“Oh, you said I was hot and smart didn’t you.” I started twitching and laughing hysterically at his comment, while my other friends just looked at him amazed and while Brian explained to him what I said.
So yeah anyways we started arguing about my intelligence after that cuz he has this belief that his read and write levels are superior to mine which isn’t true, and then he brought up his superhero essay that he wrote for English class……. (3) I had to read it over like 20 times cuz it made no sense at all. Anyways we pretty much read the rest of the back of the map and it said to find the treasure, to find the heart, you need love and friendship and this map. Back track to the hidden house and you’ll find your next clue of course they need me and a Spanish dictionary to figure it out ……..R U F_ING KIDDING ME!  After someone shouted that me and Allie and Jessie Shouted F for FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!(4)
So then we walked back to the deserted house where we first found the skeleton key then subconsciously I touched and fingered the skeleton key that was still around my neck I hadn’t taken it off since I had first put it on…… then we walked back into the house that started this whole adventure I looked around again as the sunlight poured into the room from the door. It looked exactly like it did the first time me and my friends walked in and found the first map piece except for one thing there was a body on the ground and there was a note in the guy’s hand. Cautiously I walked over and checked the persons pulse oh good the persons alive. Then I took a better look at him and figured out the guy was around my age Jeez what happened to him I carefully shook him awake. As he opened his eyes I noticed they were a pretty color brown. Oh wait now I know who this kid is he’s my friend lexi’s crush.(5) Wait…. Why is he here?! Um hey can I have that note I asked and grabbed it out of his hand. When I looked at the sheet I noticed it was the same kind of paper as the map.  
I stared at him. “Where did you get this?”
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Author's Comments

1. i shall not name this kid

2. i said yes, you idiot, i speak Spanish. for thos of you that don't know

3.That was such a horrible essay. that is also the assignment that got this story started. yeah u could do soething shiny in the river or make your own super hero. Allie u should put your story up here btw.

4.TWEWY joke ^^

5.not naming this guy either but i kno apple chan is gonna beat me up .

i belong to myself
brian belongs to himself
allie belongs to herself and Yoshiya Kiryu(Joshua belongs to her as well XD.*gets shot*
Okay well now that alive again glares at Joshua.
All of my other friends who i'm to lazy to mention belong to themselves
all of Brian's friends belong to themselves and now that's it . plz comment ^^

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:iconcookiemonster1204:
when is this over, ur dragging it out

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:iconanimegirl0216:
if u don't like it don't read it simple as that

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you become one with mother russia ,da? Russia hetalia fan!

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:iconorca732:
OMG YAYZ u put up another part!!
but..btw...is this secret passage way that little opening between the line of trees near your red barn? cuz i used that a LOT during..whatever we were playng..hide and seek or manhunt idr..

O_O KEVIN?? NAD TWEWY XD

i dont think i should put it up cuz idk if it would be considered fanfiction because i rnadomly inseted joshua in there


O______O OMG if thast who i think he is WHY DEDOS HAVE A PIECE OF HTE MAP?? IS it who i think it is..?

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:iconjokergrl4467:
WHAT THE FUCK WHO IS THIS PERSON!!!

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:iconanimegirl0216:
lol u really don't kno!

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\" when u laugh i laugh, when u cry i cry , when u fall down a hill and hurt yourself i\\\'ll laugh\\\"

you become one with mother russia ,da? Russia hetalia fan!

Sarcasm is my second languangue ^^

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:iconanimegirl0216:
*twitchtwitch*

yes kevin and TWEWY

okay

who do u think it is and send it in a NOTE!

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\" when u laugh i laugh, when u cry i cry , when u fall down a hill and hurt yourself i\\\'ll laugh\\\"

you become one with mother russia ,da? Russia hetalia fan!

Sarcasm is my second languangue ^^

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:iconorca732:
...what..? was i right?

OMG

yuuuuuuup

uh..alrighr!

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:iconanimegirl0216:
1) yes your the second person who knows about it now!

2) I KNOW XD

3) yeah

4) thx

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\" when u laugh i laugh, when u cry i cry , when u fall down a hill and hurt yourself i\\\'ll laugh\\\"

you become one with mother russia ,da? Russia hetalia fan!

Sarcasm is my second languangue ^^

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:iconorca732:
1. who eslle does?
2. XD
3. wheee!
4. ur welcoem?

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